This is my very first story I have ever written. I am no pro, but I have been working on this for a couple of days now. I just want some feedback to see what anyone thinks about my story. Thanks! So here we go... It's the night before Hilary's big day, her 18th birthday. She has been waiting for this day to come since she began her relationship with her much older boyfriend Joel Madden. By law, Hilary and Joel both know that it's illegal for them to engage in any sexual intercourse cause she is considered a minor still. Hilary and Joel therefor made a pact that they would wait for her birthday until they have sex. Hilary and Joel are in the studio working on new material for her upcoming album. It's also just minutes away from midnight. When the clock strikes twelve, it will be officially Hilary's birthday and she is well aware...
" Come on Joel, it's getting late and I'm getting tired!" Hilary shouted
" But babe, I want this to b...
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